Wednesday, May 30, 2007

"Heroes – Armageddon" : Part Two "How to really stop an exploding man"

Suddenly Peter can feel the ground.. He’s the only one able to walk on it, while everything else is falling.. He’s surprised..

Peter’s warped into some other time, but at the same place.. sees that everything is normal. Peter walks over to a shop and sees his mother. Peter walks in.. and his mother is not at all surprised to see him.

Angela.. “You’re right on time, Peter..”

Peter says.. “Mother, please help me.. I was with Sylar and all of a sudden.. these unusual things started happening to me..!”

Angela.. “Peter, Its time for me to tell you something.. I know that you are going to blow up new york.. I knew it all the way..”

Peter.. “How?”

Angela.. “Because I have seen it.”

Peter.. ”So, you can see the future?”

Angela.. “Not quite.... I see the world without time. I’ve also seen the future change a number of times.. every time somebody tries to make a change, which is done many times by a person named Hiro Nakamura, and of course me, a new timeline is created somehow.. And I can see through the events of every timeline..

Remember you saw a vision of yourself blowing up new york?

I saw it too.. and you’ve got that ability from me..”

Peter.. “But why are you telling me this now? Why didn’t u tell this to me before?”

Angela.. “Its difficult, Peter.. I am committed to some cause that is going to save the world. And now I want you to understand.. that the only way to save the world, is for that bomb to go off..

I know this is hard for you to understand.. Your father, me, Charles and Linderman had sought out a plan to save the world some years ago... Peter, I don’t know whether I should be telling you this, but there is a man, who brings with him destruction and countless deaths.. He wont stop.. I’ve tried to see him in the future.. but I simply cannot find him anywhere.. All I see is destruction and suffering.. But I see this suffering only in one timeline.. I don’t know how, but somehow, if the bomb dosent go off, he survives. It seems like the only way to kill him is for the bomb to blow off.. If you don’t understand this Peter, the world will face its doom… You have to go through with this..

I love you Peter, but if this tragedy dosent happen, all will be lost… If I had told you all of this, it would’ve never really happened.. and the future I am most afraid of would be a reality..

I also know that we wont be losing you after the bomb.. “Save the cheerleader.. save the world”.. isn’t it? After saving her, you have been given the invaluable gift of your life. You don’t die, I have seen it”

Both walk towards the counter…Angela keeps a pair of socks in her pocket.. She is caught by the guard.. who immediately arrests her for shoplifting…

Peter.. “Why?”

Angela.. “I just wanted to feel alive again” ..

Peter recollects these words..

As they take her away from Peter, she says.. “This is all meant to be.. I am counting on you..”

Peter remembers Angela’s words from the hospital..

“Its time you took a hard look at you’re life.. and if there are CHANGES to be made, I want to be here to help you…”

Peter closes his eyes, concentrating on his power and trying to return to the present time..

Claude stands behind Peter, who goes from invisible to visible..

Peter returns to the moment he’s holding Sylar with his freezing hands..

Peter immediately leaves Sylar’s throat.. He seems a bit dizzy by the time travel.. So Sylar takes charge and uproots a parking meter nearby, brings it to his hands using telekinesis, and begins hitting Peter very hard..

[he does this to provoke peter from blowing up]

Sylar.. “I thought you were like me.. But you are so pathetic.. You are so weak..”

Peter rages in anger.. “I a m not weak….”

Two cars parked on the opposite roads fly towards Sylar.. Sylar stops both of them in the air just before they hit him.. The cars fall on either side of him.. Sylar raises his hands and melts them to liquid metal.

Sylar.. “Try again Peter.. Is that all you’ve got?”

Peter concentrates hard.. and glasses from nearby buildings break and come charging towards Sylar from all four sides… This time Sylar is a hurt as many shards pierce him...

Sylar is down while Peter reads someone's mind.. “So this is the place where Peter blows… I have to take Sylar out of here.. Then I can....” Peter loses his mind communication from that person

Sylar gets angry and radiates radioactive energy.. Two radioactive globes are seen on Sylar’s hands and he fires them at Peter, hurting him badly.. But Peter regenerates.. However, as Peter is exposed to Sylar’s power, Peter gets a stimulus and his hands begin to glow.. Peter gets scared but tries to control it..

Suddenly, Molly sees a man in the dark.. standing some distance apart from molly... and is very scared and holds onto Mohinder.. She cries in fear..

Hiro teleports to the place.. after seeing a painting at Isaac’s loft about the Sylar-Peter showdown.. He calls Sylar. Sylar is surprised but not afraid.. Hiro slows down time to kill Sylar head on and forces his sword through him.. Sylar is shocked as Hiro stabs Sylar.. since Sylar regarded Hiro as a “silly little man”.

Sylar falls to the ground…. And flashes are seen in his eyes showing the moments till he’s down…

Suddenly, Hiro says in a changed tone.. “Come on Sylar.. get up.. we have to go now”. He touches Sylar and both of them vanish into thin air.

Peter slowly goes out of control…

Claire reaches the spot.. n looks at her dad.. Her dad has injuries, so he cannot get up and says… “ You should’ve gone out of the city..! what are you still doing here?”

Claire.. “I cannot leave you dad..”

Peter is about to explode.. Nathan comes looking for Peter and sees that he is exploding.. Nathan tries to come near him but is unable to face the strong radiation. HRG tells Claire to shoot Peter at point blank range so that the bullet goes through his brain. Claire takes out her gun and walks towards Peter. Her skin is ripped off completely as she goes near Peter but she regenerates and makes it close to him. She shoots him at point blank range and the bullet goes through his brain, making him unconscious.

All of them rush to the spot while Mohinder checks out the man in the dark.. The man is on the ground and has no pulse.. He’s dead.

Paramedics and Police arrive at the scene.. and Molly is absolutely terrified, as if someone bad is watching her.

Future spoilers [for my next part!!]

- of course, don’t read if u don’t want to spoil the fun! -

Yet there is no sign of Hiro or Sylar. The bomb is stopped, but two lives which were supposed to end with the bomb were spared.

One life was spared because of Peter’s travel to his past… another life was just spared by the bomb impact.

One of them being the one who possessed Hiro’s soul… who is as power hungry as Sylar and there is also someone else…

A phone rings…

The Haitian is in a motel in las vegas.. and picks the phone up..

Man on the phone… “Help me. please. It has gone beyond my control. You’re the only one who can help me!!”

There are sounds of tables and chairs banging against the walls..

Phone goes dead..

The Haitian : “Im on my way, Father Gray…”


I'll write next part in about a week or more than that.. give me some time to think of the strangest things to show and the fiercest villians to create!


P.S. : I'd greatly appreciate ur comments and views.. Just click "Post comment" on this blog below!

Heroes - Armageddon : Part One : "How to really stop an exploding man"

Hi guys... I am a fan of the "Heroes" TV series.. After the season finale, I had decided to write my own finale of how it should've been done.. There are 2 parts that Iv written for the finale.. Now, Part one starts from a point in the show when at the end, both Peter and Sylar confront each other... I've tried to keep the no. of plotholes to a minimum.. In this version of the story, u'll have more action, more deadly heroes and villians.. Watch out as to how a new timeline takes birth when Peter makes a change obliviously... And how the world is in peril again when someone more powerful than Sylar takes over.. This series is named "Heroes - Armageddon"... Any comments appreciated.. Please report any plotholes that you think that this story may have and I'll clarify them for you.. If the script needs a change, please do tell me.. Enjoy!


Sylar and Peter confront each other..

Sylar : “Just like I saw it coming…..”

Sylar lifts peter up, making a scar on his face like that in the future episode.. just to stimulate him to blow up..

DL seems to be near to his death.. so Nikki and Micah cry and are supposedly saying their last lines to him..

Peter screams, his hands begin to glow.. he seems helpless... but Peter finds his strength and recalls Hiro’s power and reverses time to the point where he meets sylar, his scar slowly vanishing..

Now peter is enraged and pulls sylar towards him [telekinesis], holding his neck by his hand and uses his ice power to freeze sylar's throat.. sylar is now helpless for few seconds.

Peter reads sylar's mind... “This is not what I saw.. what is happening? How are you doing this?”

Peter reads molly’s mind… “What do u want? Please do not hurt me..”

Peter turns over to Molly to see that she’s concentrating very hard but there is no one beside her except Mohinder, dl, micah and nikki.. Molly is very afraid..
peter gets distracted.. now when peter recalls his power [mind read], he gets unstable as he begins to read a lot of minds out there.. of all the characters..[this scene is same as the scene after claude throws peter on a cab]. In a flash, peter reads some random thoughts..

Then, the world pauses...everyone is frozen in time but peter. His eyes go white, he begins to see some flashes.. He sees a view of kirby plaza, in the morning. Peter sees Claire sitting near the Kirby plaza place [where Peter ends up fighting Sylar… She seems like “remembering” Peter] .. Claire is shocked to see him.. She says.. “You’re alive? Its so good to see you again! But how did this happen?”

Peter is confused.. He says “I don’t know. Why are u saying this. Did I really blow up?”...

. Suddenly, there is a loud thud..

Peter and Claire see something gruesome on the streets. Something invisible which is absorbing everything in its path. Every thing is absorbed into thin air.

Claire : “What is that?”

Now they feel something like an earthquake aftershock and suddenly everything starts falling towards the sky.. cars, people, buses... as if the world had been made devoid of gravity.. Peter gets hold of a pole while Claire is holding his other hand. He cannot hold her and she falls up into the sky like everyone else. Peter screams … “Claire!”


Heroes - New Timeline : Preface

Im a heroes fan so I took some time to develop my own story for the finale.. I’ll start this short storyline with the peter-sylar fight... this fight goes on for much longer than u expect and my whole story will be about about 2hrs+ on video.. everyone is at the same place as shown in the finale.. bennet and matt r down.. nikki is with dl, micah, molly and mohinder. claire n nathan have not arrived. SYLAR HAS NOTHING TO LOSE NOW.. HE WANTS EVERYONE TO BE DEAD.. AND FOR PETER TO BLAST.. HE ASSUMES THAT THE RADIATION FROM PETER WONT AFFECT HIM AS HE'LL BE IMMUNE TO HIS OWN POWER..AND HE WONT DIE ANYWAY [AND HE TRIES TO AVOID GETING BLOWED UP HIMSELF]

This is my 2nd attempt at this.. So plz tell me what u think about it..

P.S. : Some story changed due to plotholes in my previous version of the story. And Ive added some revelations before ending this fight..

If you guys find any plotholes, plz tell me those! And if u want to post this somewhere, do credit me.

I’ll come straight to the action part…. Then some revelations and expositions.. I would've done the entire episode but i did this because I was completely disappointed by the finale...